Hi {{firstName}},
After my last note, I did a quick audit of {{company}}'s sign-up flow.
The verification email lives in promotions tab on Gmail (link to inbox screenshot). About 28% of your sign-ups probably never see it. That's a fix worth making whether or not we ever work together.
If you want, I'll send you the three changes that fix this. No call needed.
— {{senderFirstName}}Follow-ups should add value, not repeat the ask. Doing the work of an audit between emails gives you a fresh reason to write that isn't 'just checking in.' The 'no call needed' line removes the implied burden of a meeting.
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