Hi {{firstName}},
Most B2B SaaS trials convert to paid at 14–18%. Below that, the lifecycle emails are usually the leak.
I rewrote the trial sequence for {{recentCustomerCompany}} last quarter — same product, same audience. Three changes:
1. Day-1 email dropped the feature list and asked a single question.
2. Day-3 email led with an in-product screenshot of their own data.
3. Day-7 reframed the pricing question instead of pitching.
Trial-to-paid went from 16.2% to 21.8% over six weeks. I have the before/after sequence if you want it.
Curious — is trial-to-paid where you're focused this quarter, or is it activation?
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