Hi {{firstName}},
I've been using {{company}} for six weeks. Three things I'd flag, in order of importance:
1. The bulk-edit on the templates page silently keeps the old tags — surprised me twice.
2. The Slack notification copy reads like a system alert; it could explain the change in human terms.
3. The trial email on day 5 contradicts the in-app upsell modal.
That's it. I'm a paying user, not selling anything — just figured if I were the PM I'd want this in writing.
— {{firstName}}Sometimes the best cold email is the one without a pitch. PMs and founders of products you use are reachable, and showing up with three specific bugs/observations puts you on their radar as a high-signal person. Later, when you do have something to sell, they remember you.
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