Hi {{firstName}},
We're trying one last time. 20% off anything in your cart or anywhere on the site — code COMEBACK20.
No deadline tricks. No 'expires in 6 hours' fake countdown. The code works until you use it or until next quarter, whichever's first.
[Use COMEBACK20]
If 20% isn't enough to bring you back, the issue isn't price — and we'd rather hear what is. Reply.
— The {{brand}} teamWhen you do use a discount in winback, be honest about it being the last resort and skip the fake urgency. 'No deadline tricks' is unusual phrasing that re-establishes trust. Don't deploy this until you've tried at least two non-discount touches.
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